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essay on the writing of poetry is taken from parts of my
textbook, The Writer's Dictionary, Gary Langford, UWS Press. I
wrote the textbook for usage of students in Creative Writing
subjects, which progressed from Bachelor to doctorate level at
my university in Sydney. The book was reprinted in different
editions four times in five years.
My students came from many cultures where at least half of them
were from homes where English was a second language. Of course,
once the passion for writing is there, poets can be from
anywhere and any background.
Writing rubbish is easy.
Writing well is not easy.
In most cases, you need to spend hours on your work to make it
work. Do not try to write a great piece of writing the moment
you have a go, giving up when it reads as flat as an uncooked
curry or tandoori. A rarity is a poet who does not change a poem
when it is reprinted from one book to another, or one magazine
to another.
We are all great fiddlers, are we not where our orchestra is all
that is around us?
Great writers can be less than brilliant spellers but have a
fascination for words and what they can do, along with the
layout or oral form in poetry.
Of course, the more you write, the better your feeling for
language and shape, as I suggest in the major piece from my
book, adapted for Kritya below.
Poet.... Poetry....Prose poetry....Poetry
Personification....Visual Poetry
1 A poet is a writer who expresses imagination in
intense language through imagery and form; who writes for others
to read, understanding the importance of words, form and effect
where they are used to move people, other than going to their
car and driving away; who writes with emotion and intensity of
expression where the fewer the words the greater the power of
language must be to work.
Poets are raiders of the inarticulate, expressing what is
inside to make what is outside more bearable. A poet has
the language when others have lost it, or they never had it in
the first place, sometimes shown by, what the hell is
this when they read your work, or in education, that's not
real learning.
One of my poems from my collection, Jesus the Galilee
Hitch-hiker starts off as follows:
Drunken, alone, in debt and book less,
Wife leaving him, children not speaking,
Car wrecked, the house of poetry burnt down.
He prayers there is life in the underground,
Finding 12 painted on every step.
12, he shouts,
There must be more of us left than this.
2 Poetry is the intense expression of feeling, not always
distinguishable from fiction, particularly imagistic fiction
where the only variation is form, resulting in one of the major
differences between two of the main areas of writing being
word-intensity in one (poetry) and less in the other (fiction).
In the fog, try to catch poetry, try to breed lines from any
ether in your life.
Exercise. Test a verse you have written by taking away
the form and running the lines together to see if it's more
chopped up prose than poetry, i.e. where you can still read it
where the form becomes irrelevant. This is a common ailment of
beginner writers who think they have written a poem, purely due
to popping the words into a verse form. Wrong. Poetry is an
elevated form of expression of thoughts and emotion in metrical
form, rather than only verse.
Poetry also relates to lyrics, music and dance as lyric poems
were once sung to the lyre in Greek mythology, or the mythology
of other cultures. In other words, poetry is the nearest writing
form to music. Language is just as important a musical
instrument to play with as a guitar, a flute, or any other one
of musical expression of emotion and belief.
Performance poets cross the bridge between music and poetry,
such as the American poet Robert Bly who used an ancient Greek
instrument in his poetry performances.
Exercise. Write a poem to music, whether song lyrics or
not. Or take lyrics and adjust them to yourself as the music
plays, whether on radio, tape or CD. If they are
generalizations, try to personalize them and see if it has
greater effect for you.
3 Prose poetry merges two separate forms of writing, showing
there is also a bridge between these different major forms of
expression, something I have enjoyed in my writing, reflected in
the fact that prose poetry is one of the formats in half of my
books of poetry, as well as appearing in most of my novels. The
form is not as contemporary as many people believe. The French
poet, Baudelaire, used this form in the 19th century.
You might also consider pattern poetry that creates the mood in the shape,
such has the 12 pattern poems Dylan Thomas, the Welsh poet,
used.
One of mine is a poem in dialogue, taken from my collection, Love at the
Traffic Lights:

What would you do if I died tomorrow?
Write a poem for you to read.
How can I read a poem if I am dead?
Like you do now - with great difficulty.
Would you grieve for me?
Absolutely.
How long? How much?
That depends.
On what?
Whether your poem is unforgettable.
Prose poetry can be a vignette, a brief story, a
sketch of language. The principal difference is length and form,
different to fiction and poetry where the principal form uses
lines from one side of the page to the other, or verses. The
narrative element in poetry is often built around one incident
compared to a few incidents in fiction. There is no hard
boundary between these two forms of self-expression. If you do
try it, or you have done so, you will know the key is enjoyment.
Like most forms of writing, if you don't enjoy it, don't use it.
4 Poetry Personification is where you select an object or
creature so they represent humanity, or a spiritual form you
wish to write about. I have used this form of self-expression
where I have personified love, chocolates, cats, skiing (a
visual poem), dolphins, dogs and death. The most familiar one I
have used is poetry on earth, air, fire and water. I wrote one
on dolphins due to my daughter's interest with them. The poem
ends as follows:
In the morning she goes to school,
wearing a dolphin around her neck,
light as air, sweet of breath.
A dolphin catcher is sent to the school,
unable to net either of them,
believing he is having hallucinations.
The dolphin dances with the small girl,
asking her to marry him.
Together, they float off in the rain.
5 Visual Poetry is where what you see is what you get. These
poems can be produced by the use of cut-ups/computer art/traced
object shape or a photocopier where the key with the shape may
well be the title that goes with it. For example, think of a
title that goes with an empty page, such as Knowledge or
a single piece of punctuation, such as War that goes with
a large exclamation mark on the right hand side or a number of
them in the shape of a skull.
It is a developing poetic form on the inter-net. Keep in mind visual art
has often gone with poetry in many languages and cultures, such
as in the English culture, the poetry of William Blake
(1757-1827). At its best, it is a dynamic form. At its worst, it
is banal art.
The visual poems I use mix the forms, yet also reflect I am stronger with
shape than I am with computer art. An example of my shape poetry
where the words reflect the subject is Modern Diseases
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EatEatEatEatEatEatEatEat
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