अपने
पति को मार डालने के लिए वार किया (परी)
यही तुम्हारा पागलपन था
और तुम्हारी तरह
और उन सभी औरतों का
जो हर पल स्वयं पर जबरदस्ती करते
मूर्तरूप क्रोध को
दबा नहीं पाती।
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नर्स गुस्सा कर रही है
शर्म आनी चाहिए तुम्हें!
तुम एक चींटी के मरने पर रो रही हो....(परी)
हम हैं तुम्हारे साथ
हम जानते हैं कि तुम्हारी नर्स को
ईश्वर के बनाए इंसान से प्यार नहीं
औरत हो कर भी वह
तुम्हारी चींटी की कीमत नहीं समझती
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दवाई की गोली और शीशी की जगह
यदि वे मुझे एक गमला दें दे
मैं उसमें चींटी की मरी देह दफना दूँगी
तो उसका रहस्य लाल पंखुड़ियों में खिल उठेगा (परी)
पागल खाने क्यों होते हैं?
क्यों नहीं होते
इंसानी प्रेम-स्नेह के स्कूल?
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शाक थेरोपी?
शाक थेरोपी!
शाक थेरोपी, क्या कोई और भी शाक थेरोपी है
तुम्हारी दुनिया में (रति)
जानती हो ना
शाक थेरोपी जायज है!
जायज समाज में
एक जायज विवाह में
जिसके खिलाफ
कितनी ही परियाँ रहती हैं खामोश
यह शाक थेरोपी है परियो के जीवन का हिस्सा
बस चुप रहो!
चुप्प!!
बिल्कुल चुप्प!!!
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यदि माँ ने नहीं सोचा होता
तो तुम भी नहीं सोचती परी
किसी के लिए, किसी के भी लिए। (रति)
जो जिन्दा है
जो सपने देखती है
आसमान देखती है
जो जानती है.. वह वस्तु नहीं
वह सोचती है
(ईशिता)
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My dearest Madam,
Thanks for your kind mail and information about kritya ...
sincerely
kee thampi
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Dear Rati,
I saw the Italian issue. very impressive. Thanks for the
acknowledgement. I am not yet a DR. I am still finishing off my
doctorate. Will write
soon.
Usha
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Dear Rati Saxena,
very glad to publish
on your website.
Very Thanks
and all my best
Alberto Mori
www.albertomoripoeta.com
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Dear mem,
God morning. I had read yr's march'07 issue.I am very happy to
know that this issue is specially for Italian poetry. I hope that
"KRITYA" must be give the new things in any time to the
reader. With bright future to "KRITYA" & best of "HAPPY HOLLY".
Thanks.
Abhijit Payeng, Wardha
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Can't wait to read it, my friend! Hope you are well.
Ward
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Dear editor, thanks for everything you did for our work. i do
not know if my essay was a good one and am not sure about the
precision of its English / i practice it as a spoken language,
not as a written one. i am writing in a hurry now, i only wanted
to say you Thanks.
yours,
massimo sannelli
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thank you!
publique la informacion en seccion "web" de http://isla_negra.zoomblog.com
regards
Gabriel
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Rati Ji,
Dhanyavad. Aap bahut Achha Kaam kar rahi hain. Mera saadhuvaad.
Ramesh Mehta
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क़ृत्या का हर अंक अनुठा एवम ताजगी लिये
हुए है. सुरुचिपूर्ण एवम कलात्मक होने के
साथ रचनाओ का चुनाव भी उत्कृष्ट है. विषयो
की विविधता एवम मौलिकता प्रभावित करती है.
बधाईया और शुभकामनाए.
प्रभा मुजुमदार
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Dear Rati
Congratulations on bringing out an excellent issue on
Italian Poetry.
I wish to send you an article on American Poetry of 21stcentury.
During my recent visit to States I got an opportunity to
attend about 12 meetings called Lunch Poems where the local and
specially invited poets used to read out their latest poems. It
has already appeared in the journal of University of California.
I think it could be of great interest to your readers.
With regards
Mohan KishorDiwan
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Dear Ratiji,
Thanks for the presentation of the month. We shall surely
explore the poetic creations.
Good wishes,
Aju Mukhopadhyay
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Thanks Rati, I look forward to it, knowing it is more of your
best journal creativity which is first rate.
I hope you've received your copy of the academici anthology and
like it. I think you shine in it.
Joneve
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Congrats on another imaginative issue Rati. Always a pleasure to
get the new Kritya.
Thanks,
Nate
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Dear friend - I am looking forward to having time soon to savor
the latest Kritya. Italian poetry. Yes, what an excellent choice
to spotlight in terms of culture and history. So much that we
have in the West for good or ill has come out of Italy or that
region from antiquity. Currently, I watch the HBO special Rome
with avid interest and The Sopranos have long been a favorite.
So, the secular Italian from Caesaerean days to the Mafia of
today's New Jersey are major influences when I am in pain and
must sit on heat to recover my ability to continue. I also once
taught Language Arts to elementary students at the Italian
Cultural Center here in Kansas City.
A bout of illness, more work in this "home stretch" of the
school year, repairs at home, wild cat rescue - these are a few
of the happenings that have taken up my time and kept me from
Poetry.
I hope you are well and recovered from your illness.
All best, Christina
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Thank you so much for you kind words Rati
and thank you for allowing me to present you with a selection of
my poems
i feel they are a voice for all to listen to and thank you again.
i have the first proof of my first book of forty poems and it
will be
available very shortly
beginning middle to end of February, my wife Donna and myself
are publishing
ourselves
abd it has been a steep learning curve.
ps it your journal online only or can you subscribe? if it is
possible i would
like to.
freedom is a wonderful feeling
and i sense it in your voice
and charming as well, it is.
the sound it makes; so nice,
as i ask. Why cant we all be like?
all our love
robin and donned
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Dear Rati,
Thanks for the invite. I see your dream is growing and further
materializing. If I
could be of assistance as a consultant/advisor, I'd be glad to
do so. I found that
comment about Dickinson's dashes by Massimo Sannelli very
interesting. Odd that Italian
translators should leave those dashes out. I do, however, see
them as more than "scars."
http://www.thedrunkenboat.com/kennedy.html
Best regards,
Lillian Kennedy
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Rati
Thank you for presenting my poems, they look very nice indeed
And I also enjoy reading other poets works
That would otherwise never have been presented
without all your hard work.
Please find below minor corrections and alterations.
And attached front and back cover of my first collection of
poems
The Heart Of Poetry First Journey
The back has a bit about me which you may want to use Rati.
Kindest regards
my website is being currently updated and will have details of
the book
there soon.
Kindest regards
Hare Om
Robin
